Our poetry teacher gave us the task to write a poem based on three subjects with a minimum of 12 lines. I tried to write the poem in the format of "Coming Home".
My senses turn dull,
While I stroll through the halls,
Of my beautiful house
Turning into dust.
With my eyes I see
Vivid memories in pictures,
As I prepare a cup of tea,
For my peevish, little sister.
I can hear my mother,
Cooking at the kitchen.
The smoke covers all the windows,
Like a nuclear winter.
My father isn't here,
He is wearing off his body,
Trying to beat life,
For some miserable money.
I like to stay at my room,
Because it helps me kill time,
It helps me bloom,
It helps me unwind.
I wash my face,
To escape from this cruel world,
To blur my senses,
That don't let me stay afloat.
Awesome work Valentín!
ResponderBorrarThis poem is sooooo good!
You´ve made great use of vocabulary and rhyme. The images and metaphors you´ve created are really something of your own.
It´s been a pleasure to read you.
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Lovely,Valentín! I really enjoyed it.
ResponderBorrarLovely,Valentín! I really enjoyed it.
ResponderBorrarOutstanding piece of poetry!!!!
ResponderBorrarbeautiful, Agustin!
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